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Post by Mrs Dan Hawkins on Oct 26, 2003 11:07:38 GMT -5
ok i'll try and explain Calen almost manages to losse James whilst running through the town and makes it to the other side of the island but her ship with u lot on it hasn't quite got there yet , Will or someone see's her and also sees James creep up behind her and capture her .James takes her back to his ship
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 26, 2003 11:17:24 GMT -5
so basically kira, we have to scrap the story, since krys is taken to james's ship there is no possible way of you seeing her being led into a secluded building. you can still be a stowaway for the time being! we'll think of something later.
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Post by Athena on Oct 26, 2003 11:21:39 GMT -5
How about I still stowaway. The crew begins to get worried when the Cap't hasn't shown up yet. You all find me, and decide that since I know my way around town, that I and perhaps a few other's shall go and try and find Cap't. We find her, there's a lovely fight, I save Calen and she grant's me and honorary place on her ship, Savvy?
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Post by Mrs Dan Hawkins on Oct 26, 2003 11:23:27 GMT -5
no u don't i actually did have an idea of how Kiera can help. Whilst James is looking for Calen in the town he can tell one of his men that as soon as she is captured she is to be taken back to the ship . Kiera can be hidden from view, afried of being captured herself , and can overhear the convo which she can relay to will and ana when they have found her onboard
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Post by Athena on Oct 26, 2003 11:37:39 GMT -5
Alright, do you want me to edit my post and include me hearing Jame's speak?
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Post by Mrs Dan Hawkins on Oct 26, 2003 19:42:23 GMT -5
if u don't mind ;D
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 26, 2003 19:49:33 GMT -5
yay i like it oh joy! Ok, we have a newcomer ***say a huge welcome to Ms Turner!!** Yay!!! Here's her description Ok, I know I should've done this ages ago but umm *racks brain looking for excuse* well, I'm just doing it now ok! Susanna BarkesFemale 19 She has white blonde hair, brown eyes, and has a small, petite nose which she likes to think is her best facial feature. She can't remember her mother or father, she was brought up by her brother, she has sailed before with him, she has also always lived in Port Royal and knows most of the locals. Her brother taught her to fight with a sword, and she has mastered most techniques, she carries this, along with a dagger. A picture, I know it's of Sarah Michelle Gellar, but she looks kinda like Susanna, the hair's lighter and she wouldn't be in modern clothes but... How would she fit in?
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Post by Daughter of Almost-Evil on Oct 27, 2003 1:10:14 GMT -5
Ok, I'll just refresh you guys memorys
this is some of what I wrote:Well after I got off the internet, I thought of something but my sister wanted to go on it so I've got to do it now. Since her and her brother go sailing, I thought maybe that she was on his ship, with the crew, and the ship smashes into a huge rock, cut the story short, the crew and Susanna'sbrother sacrifice their lives for Susanna and let her have the only (small lifeboat, whitch is loaded with the rest of her stuff), she finds a sandbank, and grabs her hankie, and waves it in the air to passing ships hoping for help, thats when you guys come in, and rescue susanna.
Maybe it could happen, if you guys have already set sail.
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 27, 2003 1:34:05 GMT -5
It could work, but we havent set sail yet, so you're marooned on some island aye? Is it anywhere near new providence? or port royal? or somewhere in between? hmmm i'm curious why didnt susannah row herself back to any nearby islands? maybe you can put up a trial post first here, telling us her story, she doesnt have to get to our ship just yet, you can just write the part how she got stranded and still waiting to be rescued? whaddya think?
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Post by Daughter of Almost-Evil on Oct 27, 2003 1:59:28 GMT -5
What if she rows herself to the new providence and she gets her stuff and rests by the ship, she's so tired and falls asleep, somebody sees her asleep and they see all her stuff and have a feeling she's not from around there. Whaddya think of that idea?
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 27, 2003 2:14:50 GMT -5
Ahhh, maybe Kira (Athena's character) sneaks up on you and steal your belongings (well after we've finished with saving the Capn and everthing) and you follow the trail of scattered 'stuff' (whatever they may be) and it leads you right up to our ship? But you'd have to come up with an ingenious way of sneaking up on board mate
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Post by Daughter of Almost-Evil on Oct 27, 2003 2:26:03 GMT -5
sounds good!
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 27, 2003 9:45:18 GMT -5
Glad I can be of some help, and can I ask you a favor? Would you kindly post your 'trial post' here first? Like what Athena has done, I would very much appreciate it, and remember you'd have to wait until we've done with saving the Cap'n and everything.
Oh Athena, are you ok with the 'sneaking up on Susannah bit?'
And is this ok with everybody else?
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Post by Daughter of Almost-Evil on Oct 27, 2003 10:13:24 GMT -5
Ok, I'll write my trial post A drop of sweat rolled down the back of Susanna's neck. She'd been rowing for half an hour and there was still no land in sight, she kept rowing, looking at the sinking ship in the distance, she wondered why she had left her brother, the only member of her family that she'd ever known. Susanna could remember the terrible few seconds, when she'd discovered her life, her brother's and the rest of his crew's were in danger. She remembered a frantic scurry to try to turn the ship, but it was too late, there was a crash, and the sound of splintering, as the boat hit the humungous rock in it's path. Her brother, Luke, had told her to get her stuff from the cabin, whilst he got the life boat prepared. Susanna hadn't known that the lifeboat was a tiny one, she had thought the life boat was for her and Luke. "Please Luke" she had pleaded "Come with me, I don't want to sacrifice you, I'll sacrifice my things instead. Please!" "No Susanna, don't! I'll sacrifice myself for you" Just then the deck started to crumble "Time is scarce, you must go" "Luke! No!" But as she called that the mast fell, "Watch out!" she called But it was too late, her brother was trapped underneath the mast, probably dead. " Luke, I'll always think of you" Susanna called, as she rowed further and further away from the ship. When she looked up, there was land in sight, she rowed faster, she reached the dock, and tied her boat up. She payed and lay down, back in the boat, she felt sleepy. Soon she was sound asleep, from now, things had got to get better. What do ya think now??
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Post by Summer Sparrow on Oct 27, 2003 11:25:50 GMT -5
It does have a good start... but I have a question, I think it would be more logical if the boat was too small, and the bigger boats have all been destroyed, cuz usually ships have medium sized boats, and it would also be more logical if your brother drowned beneath all the rubble, cuz if he didnt, he would've hanged on to something, I mean, he wouldnt just let himself die would he?
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